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<blockquote data-quote="Kem Rixen" data-source="post: 107641" data-attributes="member: 5832"><p>Whoa, this is disturbingly similar to my life as of last year, recently I've become a very social person. Reading this is very odd from my perspective, it's so similar.</p><p> </p><p> <u><strong>Rating:</strong></u></p><p> <em>Note: Scores add up to 25</em></p><p> <strong>Spelling and Grammer: 5/5</strong></p><p> So, lets see, there are a few minor spelling errors, nothing important.</p><p> </p><p> <strong>Concept: 8/10</strong></p><p> An original idea, followed through quite well I might add. It is a neat idea, perhapes not the most fascinating, but interesting never the less.</p><p> </p><p> <strong>Storytelling: 8/10</strong></p><p> The story is told very well, you describe things quite well, the only thing taking away is character devlopment, which you had a small bit in; in a short story this is dificult. You have a very good attention to small details, "sitting in a green chair," etc.</p><p> </p><p> <u>Additional Comments:</u></p><p> A neat, original story, nearly perfect in my mind. A good example of how other topics than action and war can be explored.</p><p> </p><p> <strong>Score: 21/25</strong></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>What do you think of this rating system, I want one and this is my basic idea. Help me make it better.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Kem Rixen, post: 107641, member: 5832"] Whoa, this is disturbingly similar to my life as of last year, recently I've become a very social person. Reading this is very odd from my perspective, it's so similar. [u][b]Rating:[/b][/u] [i]Note: Scores add up to 25[/i] [b]Spelling and Grammer: 5/5[/b] So, lets see, there are a few minor spelling errors, nothing important. [b]Concept: 8/10[/b] An original idea, followed through quite well I might add. It is a neat idea, perhapes not the most fascinating, but interesting never the less. [b]Storytelling: 8/10[/b] The story is told very well, you describe things quite well, the only thing taking away is character devlopment, which you had a small bit in; in a short story this is dificult. You have a very good attention to small details, "sitting in a green chair," etc. [u]Additional Comments:[/u] A neat, original story, nearly perfect in my mind. A good example of how other topics than action and war can be explored. [b]Score: 21/25[/b] What do you think of this rating system, I want one and this is my basic idea. Help me make it better. [/QUOTE]
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