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Dead World I + II
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<blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 125581" data-attributes="member: 5833"><p>A similar problem as the other "story" you posted. You describe only what the characters are saying and a little bit of general information, which is often far more important than the talking, unless you are describing a phone-call, but I doubt that that is the case.</p><p> </p><p>When I'm reading this, I honestly have no idea what in the world you are talking about. With a quick look on it, I conclude that it is about zombies and a handful of people that kills (or destroys, might be a more accurate description) them for a reason which is not explained... but then again, <em>nothing</em> is explained, which makes the conversation in this "story" one giant blur.</p><p> </p><p>What you posted is hardly a story. At a quick look on it, I could easily mistake it for my document of Quote of the Days, which looks somewhat similar. Even stories I read (amateurs) that don't take them selves serious are better than this, because they simply aren't a conversation and nothing else. Humor-story 'What not to call your dog' describes quite little (never is explained where the main person is, lives or looks like, nor his wife or dog) about his enviroment or himself for that matter. But that might be the point what makes the story superb, because it doesn't take itself serious in any possible way and tries to make a fool out of itself in every sentence, if not paragraph, which makes it one of the highest quality humor stories I've <em>ever</em> read. The only thing it does describe (besides the conversations) is the situation they are in. You could say it is a sort of diary with some exceptional situations. This story lacks everything I just mentioned, which truly isn't a good thing.</p><p> </p><p>As a last note, I find it remarkable that at the end of the "story" it says "to be continued" though only one line beneath it, it says 'The End!'</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Fladian, post: 125581, member: 5833"] A similar problem as the other "story" you posted. You describe only what the characters are saying and a little bit of general information, which is often far more important than the talking, unless you are describing a phone-call, but I doubt that that is the case. When I'm reading this, I honestly have no idea what in the world you are talking about. With a quick look on it, I conclude that it is about zombies and a handful of people that kills (or destroys, might be a more accurate description) them for a reason which is not explained... but then again, [i]nothing[/i] is explained, which makes the conversation in this "story" one giant blur. What you posted is hardly a story. At a quick look on it, I could easily mistake it for my document of Quote of the Days, which looks somewhat similar. Even stories I read (amateurs) that don't take them selves serious are better than this, because they simply aren't a conversation and nothing else. Humor-story 'What not to call your dog' describes quite little (never is explained where the main person is, lives or looks like, nor his wife or dog) about his enviroment or himself for that matter. But that might be the point what makes the story superb, because it doesn't take itself serious in any possible way and tries to make a fool out of itself in every sentence, if not paragraph, which makes it one of the highest quality humor stories I've [i]ever[/i] read. The only thing it does describe (besides the conversations) is the situation they are in. You could say it is a sort of diary with some exceptional situations. This story lacks everything I just mentioned, which truly isn't a good thing. As a last note, I find it remarkable that at the end of the "story" it says "to be continued" though only one line beneath it, it says 'The End!' [/QUOTE]
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