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Anything & Everything
Stories
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<blockquote data-quote="Undead_Lives" data-source="post: 114383" data-attributes="member: 5928"><p>A good short story (for you atleast...lol) but there were a few things that bugged me.</p><p>1. When people adress a captain, its "Captain" not "captain". When they say it to a person, it is a title, just like Lord or Duke. However, when they are thinking, captain is suitable because it does not refer to the specific captain, in your case.</p><p>2. "Gerard friendly answers." This sentence just does not...seem right. I can't put my finger on it, but it sound wrong.</p><p>I think I should write a tutorial in the Stories section to help you guys that are ESL (English as a Second Language) with grammar.</p><p></p><p>PS: I personally like to use Cap'n in my stories.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Undead_Lives, post: 114383, member: 5928"] A good short story (for you atleast...lol) but there were a few things that bugged me. 1. When people adress a captain, its "Captain" not "captain". When they say it to a person, it is a title, just like Lord or Duke. However, when they are thinking, captain is suitable because it does not refer to the specific captain, in your case. 2. "Gerard friendly answers." This sentence just does not...seem right. I can't put my finger on it, but it sound wrong. I think I should write a tutorial in the Stories section to help you guys that are ESL (English as a Second Language) with grammar. PS: I personally like to use Cap'n in my stories. [/QUOTE]
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