Abyss of Words

[Fladian]

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This is a story I have been wanting to write for a long time, but never really took the time or had the right inspiration to do so. I'm sure I am going to continue it, but when is still something that I cannot give as an answer.
If you've read it, feel free to comment on it. I know a story based on a fictional MMORPG is nto something you'd usually see or what is to be expected. The story is planned out, so I know what I am going to write - in opposite of other several other stories - but still,l writing about a game... it sounds weird.

 

[Undead_Lives]

Hm, it's interesting...hasn't been developed much so I can't really comment on it...
Couple things though.

bended[/b]

bent.

some of his dark hairs[/b]

hair.
Ya, that's about it. Interesting idea though. Reminds me of Hack//sign...or whatever that show's called

 

[Fladian]

.hack//SIGN was one of the two things that inspired me to write this. ^^

For this story, and another (Frontline Camp) I ignored my grammar, so it's not really necessary to point me at it. This is just how I usually type without checking.

No development has been made. After all, I need to introduce the characters first. I'm still working on the second part. It should be nearly finished.

 

[Undead_Lives]

Can't wait.
So what was the other inspiration?