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Stories
Under the sky, so blue
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<blockquote data-quote="Undead_Lives" data-source="post: 125901" data-attributes="member: 5928"><p>Hm, intriguing title <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p>The writing style is ok, personally I feel that the main character's personality didn't stand out as unique or any of that, but hey, it was done within an hour <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p>I'd go through all the grammar/spelling, but I doubt you'd want it. So, it's pretty good, but as for "greatness", I'd say no. But like I said, you wrote it within an hour.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Undead_Lives, post: 125901, member: 5928"] Hm, intriguing title :P The writing style is ok, personally I feel that the main character's personality didn't stand out as unique or any of that, but hey, it was done within an hour :P I'd go through all the grammar/spelling, but I doubt you'd want it. So, it's pretty good, but as for "greatness", I'd say no. But like I said, you wrote it within an hour. [/QUOTE]
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