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<blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 125899" data-attributes="member: 5833"><p>Learned three new words? Might I ask which words they are? <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p></p><p></p><p>I'm not sure. But within an hour of time, I really didn't have the time to check if I could use the word. I noticed many other mistakes as well, which I just didn't have the time to fix. Besides that, I also repeated a lot of unnecessary words over and over again, which is a bad thing. That all appeared because I had t rush it.</p><p></p><p></p><p>Thank you, though I personally thought it was quite predictable, not to mention that the characters I used were quite dull, except that I rarely use such kind of types. I do recognize myself a bit in one of them though, but that's unintentionally. In all honestly, I am absolutely not impressed by this story and I find it merely decent, more leaning to the bad side than anything else. Though it started out reasonable well, it is very clear that I started to rush things about halfway through the story and it is even more obvious that I was running out of time near the end. Judging how much time I need for something is my weakest point in my life, which is not ignoring names or maths. However, the judging how much time I need for something doesn't really bother me much in general, in opposite of names and calculations.</p><p></p><p>Now I just hope that the <em>judges</em> agree with your opinion, Arkidas. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Fladian, post: 125899, member: 5833"] Learned three new words? Might I ask which words they are? :P I'm not sure. But within an hour of time, I really didn't have the time to check if I could use the word. I noticed many other mistakes as well, which I just didn't have the time to fix. Besides that, I also repeated a lot of unnecessary words over and over again, which is a bad thing. That all appeared because I had t rush it. Thank you, though I personally thought it was quite predictable, not to mention that the characters I used were quite dull, except that I rarely use such kind of types. I do recognize myself a bit in one of them though, but that's unintentionally. In all honestly, I am absolutely not impressed by this story and I find it merely decent, more leaning to the bad side than anything else. Though it started out reasonable well, it is very clear that I started to rush things about halfway through the story and it is even more obvious that I was running out of time near the end. Judging how much time I need for something is my weakest point in my life, which is not ignoring names or maths. However, the judging how much time I need for something doesn't really bother me much in general, in opposite of names and calculations. Now I just hope that the [i]judges[/i] agree with your opinion, Arkidas. :P [/QUOTE]
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