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Anything & Everything
Stories
A Symphony of Frost and Flame
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<blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 124755" data-attributes="member: 5833"><p>As Undead said, it had to be short. It was satisfying though. </p><p></p><p>As for the story itself, I can't say it was much more than only decent. It felt a bit like the story was told to a child and that several words had to be spared because they were not right to use in such a situation. Besides that, make sure you never try to use 'and then' in a sentence.</p><p></p><p>The quality did increase as the story progressed, the end probably being the best of the piece. Though admitted that there was a part somewhere near the middle that was excellent as well, and lifted my hopes.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Fladian, post: 124755, member: 5833"] As Undead said, it had to be short. It was satisfying though. As for the story itself, I can't say it was much more than only decent. It felt a bit like the story was told to a child and that several words had to be spared because they were not right to use in such a situation. Besides that, make sure you never try to use 'and then' in a sentence. The quality did increase as the story progressed, the end probably being the best of the piece. Though admitted that there was a part somewhere near the middle that was excellent as well, and lifted my hopes. [/QUOTE]
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