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<blockquote data-quote="johnfn" data-source="post: 122108" data-attributes="member: 6565"><p>I read the whole thing, just for you! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p></p><p>It was pretty good. You seemed to skip over a lot of good chances for descriptive detail, but you backed up the story with solid plot and character development. There were a few odd parts though, like when your guys stumble on the burned village by what seemed like pure chance. </p><p></p><p>If I was a judge, I'd give you </p><p></p><p>8.5/10</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="johnfn, post: 122108, member: 6565"] I read the whole thing, just for you! :P It was pretty good. You seemed to skip over a lot of good chances for descriptive detail, but you backed up the story with solid plot and character development. There were a few odd parts though, like when your guys stumble on the burned village by what seemed like pure chance. If I was a judge, I'd give you 8.5/10 [/QUOTE]
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