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Mario and the Conditioner

Discussion in 'Wii General' started by Danny, Aug 17, 2007.

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did you like my fanfic?

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  1. Danny

    Danny New Member

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    Here's my fanfic don't copy it or else ;)

    One early morning, Mario got a letter from Princess Peach. The letter said "Dear Mario, I left some conditioner for you in my room. Come later and pick it up Yours Truly Princess Peach." Mario was convinced because Peach always gives him presents as a thank-you. Mario later went to the Castle and met up with luigi. Luigi told mario "Let's race for whoever gets the conditioner. Winner gets Conditioner." Mario thought he was fast so he accepted the challenge without any thought. So the two raced off for the conditioner! Luigi later tricked mario by putting his foot out in the way. Mario carelessly fell and Luigi got the conditioner. Luigi laughed at Mario. Mario then kicked Luigi and gave him a poison shroom, and got the conditioner from him. Mario Later on chased recklessly to his house and luigi followed. The chase for the conditioner begins! As Luigi chases Mario, Mario eats a shroom and grows 3 times larger. Mario later on kicks Luigi and makes him fall hard on the grass. Mario then rushes home and takes a shower. The quest for the conditioner is over and Mario's hair is extremely soft!

    The End

    so what did ya guys think?
     
  2. VGS

    VGS New Member

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    Hehe, nice story!
     
  3. Khrysos

    Khrysos New Member

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    Nice :)

    btw, what´s a fanfic?
     
  4. Zigurat

    Zigurat New Member

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    Haha, it was actually kinda funny. I liked it :p
     
  5. Ryano

    Ryano New Member

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    Yeah it was a nice read, a bit short, but still a good read.
     
  6. metroid0070

    metroid0070 New Member

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    Gdog New Member

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    are you sure thats 400 words? it was alright, but it didnt have a great storyline though.
     
  8. Shripe

    Shripe New Member

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    Only 195 words.. So, you're halfway there! :p
     
  9. Jailbreak

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    hahah random, funny :D
     
  10. Snoooben

    Snoooben New Member

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    I like it. XD
     

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